Very nice attempt from you again. I liked your object sketch works on visible jars. As usual let me point out some findings
1. The question asked to draw the cookery scene of a chef working with a cooker placed on a gas burner, right ? So, I was thinking ki what is the need of showing one more person ? It's ok to include two persons but the thing is why do we need to waste time sketching the other when it is not concerned ? You could instead utlize the time for taking more care on sketching the chef erself along with giving careful detailing of other things in the scene, got it ? 2. Other thing is you are answering 20 marks ques for which you can't spend much time, so better to concentrate only on things that they asked avoiding mostly extra sketches to save time and concern more on their requirement 3. Let's suppose, we considered two women, now I'm confused on which one is chef and who is the commentor, In this scenario, it would be great if you follow some dress code to the chef, just like a big fancy hat on the hat :D 4. I think the perspective-ness of the side tables and wall cupboards are more than the perspective of the center cook bench. It is clear that the things ontop of the sde benches are clearly visible and the things on the cook table are less visible including the stove. Follow, one particular order, although what you've done is ok. But, I seriously appreciate the perspectiveness of the side benches that you have shown. 5. Microwave oven at the back is not at ll in perspective 6. You can reduce the no. of things in the scene on the side benches. Show less, but let it be clearly visible with proper details 7. Shading(detailing) for the other scene items seems good, but you can reduce the intensity. You might not get much time for that.
When I gave CEED back in 2013, I had to spend to spend almost 30-40 hrs for similar sketch ques which was just for 15 marks. N I had to use the rest 20-30 mins to answer 50 marks design as well as rest ques :P so, be careful in using the time. Try to attempt sketch ques at the last to use time accordingly!
8. You've shown light shadows too (to the right) but the direction seems wrong. The way you showed light shadow tells that the light is placed some where from the back. I t means it is just opposite to the videographer/camera, understood ? it cannot be like that right, Light should be projected to the front side of the chef as well as should not be directed on the video lens. So, the better way is to show the shadow to the opposite side! I hope u got that
Ur rest art works r good, n I will not say that this less is enough for ceed r not, u still have to practice until ur last min even if u r very gud. So, forget abt that, keep practicing, not just plain sketches, but on design ideas. Ur remaining attempts r gud too
Thank you so much sir, for taking out time and writing this. I tried to add the apron to chef's dress :p and I thought since its a cookery show, I'd make a host too...the problem i faced with the entire thig is, It took a hell lotta time...we've to attempt, like 5 questions in part-B...I guess practicing will help?! I also see the errors in shadows. I'll work on it...thank you once again. :)
I said no already in the above comment - I've spent 40 mins for my sketch work - that's hell lot of time. So here are things that help to reduce time 1. First, just make outer line sketch, concentrating on shape, proportion, objects outline etc with NO SHADING/DETAILING 2. Then give features (like chef face details, hands etc) to the main characters of the sketch like in this case, chef, cooker n the cooking table. 3. Go for little detail work, no need to give heavy details.
And finally if u find time, then you can spend as much time u wish in altering/adding more details. But like i said above, attempt the sketch question at the last and yes, with time, you will improve- that's a gud news, probably a relief to you :D
Very nice attempt from you again. I liked your object sketch works on visible jars. As usual let me point out some findings
ReplyDelete1. The question asked to draw the cookery scene of a chef working with a cooker placed on a gas burner, right ? So, I was thinking ki what is the need of showing one more person ? It's ok to include two persons but the thing is why do we need to waste time sketching the other when it is not concerned ? You could instead utlize the time for taking more care on sketching the chef erself along with giving careful detailing of other things in the scene, got it ?
2. Other thing is you are answering 20 marks ques for which you can't spend much time, so better to concentrate only on things that they asked avoiding mostly extra sketches to save time and concern more on their requirement
3. Let's suppose, we considered two women, now I'm confused on which one is chef and who is the commentor, In this scenario, it would be great if you follow some dress code to the chef, just like a big fancy hat on the hat :D
4. I think the perspective-ness of the side tables and wall cupboards are more than the perspective of the center cook bench. It is clear that the things ontop of the sde benches are clearly visible and the things on the cook table are less visible including the stove. Follow, one particular order, although what you've done is ok. But, I seriously appreciate the perspectiveness of the side benches that you have shown.
5. Microwave oven at the back is not at ll in perspective
6. You can reduce the no. of things in the scene on the side benches. Show less, but let it be clearly visible with proper details
7. Shading(detailing) for the other scene items seems good, but you can reduce the intensity. You might not get much time for that.
When I gave CEED back in 2013, I had to spend to spend almost 30-40 hrs for similar sketch ques which was just for 15 marks. N I had to use the rest 20-30 mins to answer 50 marks design as well as rest ques :P so, be careful in using the time. Try to attempt sketch ques at the last to use time accordingly!
8. You've shown light shadows too (to the right) but the direction seems wrong. The way you showed light shadow tells that the light is placed some where from the back. I t means it is just opposite to the videographer/camera, understood ? it cannot be like that right, Light should be projected to the front side of the chef as well as should not be directed on the video lens. So, the better way is to show the shadow to the opposite side! I hope u got that
Ur rest art works r good, n I will not say that this less is enough for ceed r not, u still have to practice until ur last min even if u r very gud. So, forget abt that, keep practicing, not just plain sketches, but on design ideas. Ur remaining attempts r gud too
Thank you so much sir, for taking out time and writing this. I tried to add the apron to chef's dress :p and I thought since its a cookery show, I'd make a host too...the problem i faced with the entire thig is, It took a hell lotta time...we've to attempt, like 5 questions in part-B...I guess practicing will help?! I also see the errors in shadows. I'll work on it...thank you once again. :)
DeleteI said no already in the above comment - I've spent 40 mins for my sketch work - that's hell lot of time. So here are things that help to reduce time
Delete1. First, just make outer line sketch, concentrating on shape, proportion, objects outline etc with NO SHADING/DETAILING
2. Then give features (like chef face details, hands etc) to the main characters of the sketch like in this case, chef, cooker n the cooking table.
3. Go for little detail work, no need to give heavy details.
And finally if u find time, then you can spend as much time u wish in altering/adding more details. But like i said above, attempt the sketch question at the last and yes, with time, you will improve- that's a gud news, probably a relief to you :D
It is a relief. Thank you. :)
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